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Learning How to Revise an Essay

LEGO Smart Creativity Contest Entry (JUNE WINNER!)
By Kacey Weiss, Helix Charter High School

Place a blank sheet of paper in front of each student (this is their place mat.) Then place a handful of LEGO bricks in front of each student. Tell students they have 5 minutes to create a masterpiece. After the 5 minutes is up, ask students to title their masterpiece and write the title on the placemat.   Then tell them they have 2 minutes to "change" one thing about their piece.  Have them write down on their paper how this improved the overall appearance of the piece. Then tell them to "move" a LEGO brick or cluster bricks. (one minute). Write down the change. Now give them one minute to "remove" a LEGO brick or cluster of bricks. Write down the change. Next have students explain to their partner the process of building a masterpiece.  Connect this to the art of drafting a paper (moving pieces, removing pieces, changing pieces).  Note that we never took the whole masterpiece apart; we simply made it nicer. 

Lesson Learned: Students will learn how to revise an essay and the difference between "re-doing" and "revising."

Published Thursday, November 19, 2009 10:47 AM by dsmith
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